Forgive me

Forgive me

All doors are shut
Only one way remaining
To this place of horrors and dreams
To you, I open another path to my heart

Love poisons mind
And mind poisons love
But it doesn’t blind you
It opens your eyes wider than ever before

I know what loneliness is
I lived in this nightmare for too long
The only way to escape this curse
Is by reforging the old feelings

You think everyone turned against you
But it is you
Who from decay and love
Turned your back to the world

What I told you that night were all bitter lies
Now, I reckon I went too far
Instead of helping you climbing this mountain
I pushed you down
To the point you were all alone
Against this painful reality

Though there is only one way to my heart
Many can walk alongside
You are one of those
Which I will never forget
Please, stop bleeding
And restore your life

Every dawn is a new sunset
Sometimes sad, sometimes joyful
I hope you can forget the last one
The one where I killed your last brink of hope

Now that you read my grief and my atonement
I give you two choices
Wether that you forget me
Or better, that you forgive me...

c'est vraiment beau....
tu es bilingue?

Presque. Je suis en anglais avancé depuis la 5e année faque je suis rendu assez bon.

Quoique le texte ne me déplait point, j'aurais une question
Est ce que les poèmes en anglais demandent des rimes aussi ?

Je veux dire, est ce moins courant que les poèmes Français ? ( Question de culture car tu sembles en savoir sur le sujet )

Amicalement,

Je sais pas vraiment, mais je crois que c pas mal comme en français. C'est juste que je suis vraiment poche pour faire des rimes, faque j'en fait pas.

C'est super bon !!!